Apologies up front… I have medicine head. So if a comment or statement sounds funny…disregard or you have my permission this time to play around with the statement until it made sense to you or completely skip the comment all together. (My favorite option, I might even suggest we just forget the comment ever happened.
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I found this article to be interesting and full of fun facts that I can see myself using with my students. (The fact that it took Dr. Seuss spent over a year on The Cat in the Hat was shocking to me. Since most of my 3rd graders see that book as a simple easy read, they will be astonished to know it took Dr. Seuss over a year to write. I can’t wait to share that with them.)
I know in one of my previous entries I mockingly referred to a pre-writing strategy that was taught to me in the primary grades. I do see that planning is very important and a necessary skill to teach to students. I have never really been a good planner when it comes to writing. I do plan, just not on paper. Then again I have not really worked on a project that I wasn’t going to finish immediately.
This article helps me to focus on what is good about the planning stages of writing. I liked that the article said, “Planning is not just the domain of the professional writers.” p.120 That is important for all learners to know. I have found myself trapped into thinking that just write to get it down before you forget it. And sometimes that is OK, but not all of the time. I know that when I was working on my National Board entries, I did a great deal of planning and pre-writing. I think that was one of the most challenging pieces that I have ever written.
I also wanted to comment about Louis L’Amour’s quote. “A writer’s brain is like a magician’s hat. If you’re going to get anything out of it, you have to put something in it first.” p.121. I love that quote. I was watching Romancing the Stone with Michael Douglas, Kathleen Turner, and Danny DeVito yesterday as I was trying to recover from the flu. My mother used to watch that movie every time it came on TV. I love at the end of the movie where Kathleen Turner’s character has just turned in her newest masterpiece and her book editor is finishing reading it with tears streaming down her face. You are left for a moment thinking, OK was the whole Colombian rain-forest, treasure seeking story we just witnessed her story or was it her life? OF course you are answered by the next scene depicting Jack’s dream sailboat parked outside her apartment. As he throws down the rope ladder to her he declares that he has read her novel…. This long drawn out picture is to show that (I know it’s a movie but work with me) a writer takes something that they know or have experienced to make an outstanding story. Great stories do not magically pop up out of nothingness.
Specific Connections to the text
In my classroom, I do not ask my students to do anything without building prior knowledge. The same goes for writing. For example, my literature circle class is reading Mr. Popper’s Penguins. (Wonderful book) In the book Mr. Popper takes his performing penguins on the road. I take a break from the story to allow my students to do some research on the cities that the Poppers visited. We re-read the chapters about their “tour” and then the students write their own version about what happened in each of these cities. My favorite was about how the penguins would toboggan down the steps of the Empire State Building for the experience of a lifetime. The students were able to add in lots of details from the research that they did but they were also able to include some text structure from the book which was impressive. (This activity takes place near the end of the book)
As for the inquiry method in my classroom. You see that more in my science class than writing. But, I do like the idea that was presented in this section though about drawing inferences about a person through looking at some personal effects. This would have to be scaffolded very carefully for my third graders. Inferencing is a skill that they have trouble with, but if I were going to teach this to my students I would bring in object that represent me and model how to inference about a person. I would then let students bring in objects that represent themselves to write about. As a class we would make inferences about the objects. I would finish up by bringing in objects of my husbands, the Principal’s or another teacher’s for the students to make inferences with.
Strategy instruction: I am guessing that since I just really can not let my students go without the comforts of my scaffolding in the last paragraph, I guess that example should in reality go here. I believe that children should be showed how you want something done, and why it is important to do it that way as compared to another way, let them practice with the comfort of knowing that you are there to catch them if they fall and that mistakes are fine and an expected part of the lesson. Then after all of that has been accomplished does the student go out on their own. (kinda like riding a bike. You see people ride, you want to, so you get on your bike with the training wheels. Finally you get the courage up to try with out the training wheels and you go sailing down the gravel driveway.)
How might I attempt to improve my student’s planning behaviors? I really liked the strategy that Ms. Danoff in the the report writing section used. I think that it is important for my students to hear what I am thinking about as I am reading or writing or even doing a math problem. I think that is an integral part of scaffolding your students. I think that to make my students better self-regulators in writing I need to show them the thoughts that go through my head as I plan a writing. I know that I will have to plant some artificial thoughts about strategies that I do not use but may be beneficial for my students. I use the think aloud strategy several times and mention the self-regulating strategies aloud in class. Also by conferencing with my students. I can ask them how do they keep themselves on track? Have them think aloud for me.
My thoughts on the SRSD Model. I think that the 8 principles are an essential part of any classroom. Is it easy to implement….no. I think that as an educator, you have to eat a slice of humble pie and really get down and share with your students. Much of how we learn is by seeing others do it, experiencing it and then going solo. Why would we not continue that logical progression in our own classroom? (time constraints, pacing guides, that evil 4 letter word beginning with a T (Test), plus teaching like this is exhausting. You have to be on top of your game from 8-3, 5 days a week) Teaching the way that our students need and deserve is not impossible, but hard work. It is the job that doesn’t stop simply because the time clock stopped. The state couldn’t afford to pay a truly hard working teacher for their time, because as all educators know, we are never off of the clock. ( I mean really how many times have you awakened in the middle of the night with an idea that would help ________ learn _________ or how many of us have been shopping in July and just had to buy something because it would be a great part of this lesson or that. I have even caught myself Christmas shopping for shoes and clothes for my own students. Teaching is a 24 – 7 job) Back to the principles, I do use a good many of the 8 in my classroom. Some I feel I could do better. And some I still need to implement. I can get started on something, but following through to the end is sometimes a problem for me. I have to watch it. I am not so great at principle 8. But since I know that I can work harder on it.
I need to also work on the fact that I am too wordy. That is one of my weaknesses. It takes me 200 words to say the same thing that someone would say using 10 words. Sorry. Next time I will plan my blog a little more carefully! (By the way, I just got a call from the Dr. office. They are calling in my strep throat meds to the pharmacy. No wonder I felt so bad, flu topped off with strep. What a way to fly! he he he)